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(Date in an informal format)

(Dear Name of your friend,)

Paragraph saying hello and talking about informal stuff. Your thesis should say: I'm writing because I heard you broke up with your girlfriend and this is affecting your work on the IB program.)

This paragraph should talk about the problems that braking up with his girlfriend is causing.

This paragraph should explain how to forget about her and do a good job in the IB.

This paragraph is where you say good bye and hope everything turns out good.

Sicerely,

(your name)

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how to succeed in the International Baccalaureate

By: Frank orellana

To help my friend with the International Baccalaureate I have several tips to have good performance at school. Would be good to start from the beginning of class put attention and take very seriously and work classes that let you go to learn. something very important is to do good work and not only them but try their best to make after this work will serve to study, try to do with time and paper work, internal evaluations of all kinds in which it has to do, because it will take time for the teachers will review their work so that I can then correct and go the best to obtain a high note. Otherwise if not done with you will eventually accumulate all the work and will do wrong and will not get many points for such work in addition to pressure and increased stress due to all that have to do in no time.

another very important thing is to try to make assessments, but without neglecting the tasks that allow each of the subjects and thus have better performance and doing homework and paying attention in class will help to better develop their jobs International Baccalaureate, which if it has to do is try to do the work and will not copy to a colleague because the only affected is because they will not learn anything, then it will cost to solve the tests or any exercise that put them to in class, copy it to partner, it is best to try to stop the laziness aside and work for yourself. It is also important not to miss or not go to class to avoid problems and also avoid losing any important issue and then not know what to do.

also good to be careful not to unveil a lot because it causes extra wear and does not perform well in school, do homework and laziness have always sleep well in classes for the sleepless and this makes not pay attention in class and goes wrong in the notes.

Best to succeed and make the international baccalaureate is pay attention in class, try to deliver all possible jobs and pay close attention to internal evaluations and case studies to get to achieve good take note and get the diploma and try to make it in time to avoid any mishaps and have less pressure and cause the work to have quiet time and make the necessary corrections so successful and graduate without any problem.

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A Fun Trip to New York

A Fun Trip to New York

By: Frank Orellana

The next day we went to a skating rink in the Rockefellercenter

I visited New York with my family. This trip was very good because we had a lot of fun with the family and we also visited many places, had many adventures with my cousins, parents and uncles. My uncles are living in New York and we did this trip in December last year. Our trip was a month where we had the opportunity to have enough time to get to know many places and to have fun.

The first days we visited several museums, many restaurants and in the following days we visited where the Twin Towers were before the terrorist attacks, and there was only one large empty piece of land with nothing built. That day was one of the coldest; it was 10 degrees below zero. The next day we went to a skating rink inthe Rockefellercenter. We met different places in the following days, we went to Manhattan, walked and learned a little. After that we had a trip which lasted an hour to go to New Jersey; we ate in a typical food and then returned to the house.We were also impressed by the Empire State building but we had to make a big line to get to the roof. We also went to a place that was about four hours from New York to go skiing; then we went to a mall to buy clothes and some gifts for the family that was here in Guatemala. The last place we visited was the Statue of Liberty a very nice and big place where you can see all New Town York.

To complete the trip we packed our things and then went to the airport, but had to wait about four hours to climb and take off the plane because it could not take off due to bad weather; it was snowing, so we had to wait to come back here to Guatemala which we did on fourth of January. What I learned from this trip was very interesting because I went to meet other people, the kind of life that occurs in New York that is a night lifestyle. It is also a very quiet town without many risks of assaults or something similar. I also learned a little to develop my patience because we had to wait quite a lot at the airport that the plane took off. I loved to live with my family and have lots of fun and have a great time.

In conclusion, the trip was very good, I met places and had many great memories of the pranks we did with my cousins.

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(Copy and paste one sentence that you liked from your article.)

(I visited New York with my family.) on this(This) trip was very good because we had a lot of fun and(with) the family (and we) also visited many places, had many adventures with my cousins, fathers(parents) and uncles(,)(.) (My uncles)this trip was(are) living in New York where my uncles do(and we did) this trip in December last year(,)(.) our(Our) trip was a month where we had the opportunity to have enough time to get to know (many places) and (to) have fun(.)

in the(The) first days we visited several museums, many restaurants (and) in the following days we visited the where they(the Twin Towers) were before (the terrorist attacks) the twin towers, and there was only one large (empty piece of) land with nothing built(.) on that(That) day was one of the coldest(; it) was 10 degrees below zero(,)(.) after that to the(The) next day we went to a skating rink (in) the rockefeller(Rockefeller) center(. We) met (different places) in the following days(,) we went to Manhattan, walk(walked) and learn(learned) a little(,)(.) after(After that) we had a trip there as(which lasted) an hour to go to New Jersey(;) we ate in a typical food and then returned to the house(,)(.) we(We) were also released(impressed) on(by the) empire state(Empire State building) but we had to make a big queue(line) to get on(to) the roof(,)(.) (We) also went to a place that was about four hours from New York to go skiing(;) and learn a little place after this lunch there, returned to New York and then (we) went to a mall to buy clothes and some gifts for the family that was here in Guatemala(,)(.) the(The) last place we visited was the Statue of Liberty a very nice and big (place) where you can see all the new town york(New Town York).

 to(To) complete the trip we packed our things and then went to the airport, but had to wait about four hours to climb and take off the plane because he(it) could not take off due to bad weather(;) he(it) was doing it was snowing(, so we had to wait to come) back here to Guatemala (which we did on) mucho.y the four(fourth of) January. (What) I learned from this trip was very interesting because I went to meet other people, the kind of life that occurs in New York that is (a) night (lifestyle.) (It) is also a very quiet town without much(many) risk(risks) of assault(assaults) or something similar(,)(.) I also learned a little to develop my patience because we had to wait quite (a lot) at the airport that the plane took off(.) more and better besides (I loved to) live with my family and (have) lots of fun and have a great time. 

In conclusion, the trip was very good(, I met) places and met(had) many great memories of the pranks we did with my cousins.

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on this trip was very good because we had a lot of fun and the family also visited many places, had many adventures with my cousins, fathers and uncles, this trip was living in New York where my uncles do this trip in December last year, our trip was a month where we had the opportunity to have enough time to get to know and have fun in the first days we visited several museums, many restaurants in the following days we visited the where they were before the twin towers, and there was only one large land with nothing built on that day was one of the coldest was 10 degrees below zero, after that to the next day we went to a skating rink the rockefeller center met in the following days we went to Manhattan, walk and learn a little, after we had a trip there as an hour to go to New Jersey we ate in a typical food and then returned to the house, we were also released on empire state but we had to make a big queue to get on the roof, also went to a place that was about four hours from New York to go skiing and learn a little place after this lunch there, returned to New York and then went to a mall to buy clothes and some gifts for the family that was here in Guatemala, the last place we visited was the Statue of Liberty a very nice and big where you can see all the new town york. to complete the trip we packed our things and then went to the airport, but had to wait about four hours to climb and take off the plane because he could not take off due to bad weather he was doing it was snowing back here to Guatemala mucho.y the four January. I learned from this trip was very interesting because I went to meet other people, the kind of life that occurs in New York that is night is also a very quiet town without much risk of assault or something similar, I also learned a little to develop my patience because we had to wait quite at the airport that the plane took off more and better besides live with my family and lots of fun and have a great time. In conclusion, the trip was very good places and met many great memories of the pranks we did with my cousins.

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review: Cellphones in school.

From my point of view, I think it would be a good option to ban cell phones in school because it is a very strong distraction for students. They get distracted from classes because they are used to sending text messages and so on. Besides, the novelty of the BlackBerry today has made kids become crazy and most of the teenagers have one and are always attached to them texting, or in facebook, twitter, etc. and this causes that in many classes they are distracted and not pay attention. In the end this causes a change or bad marks because of the cell. All this technology that has emerged lately in many cases is very useful but if not used properly to work students will only lose time and the phones can impair student learning at school. By banning cell phones in school, it would be easier to take classes because there would be no distraction. In conclusion the ban on cellphone would be beneficial for the student to better study and for the work environment.

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Cellphone(Cellphones) in school

In(From) my point of view(,) I think it would be a good option to ban cell phones in school because it is a very strong distraction for students. (They get distracted from) classes because they are used to send(sending) text messages and so on. besides(Besides,) the novelty of the BlackBerry to(today has made kids) become crazy and most of the teenagers have one and are always attached to them(.) texting, (or in) facebook, twitter(,) etc. and this causes a lot(that) in (many) class(classes they) are distracted and not pay attention(.) and(In the end) this causes a change or bad marks because of the cell. all(All) this technology that has emerged lately is true that in many cases is very useful but if not used properly to work and(students will) only to lose time (and the phones) can impair student learning at school. and the time to ban(By banning) cell phones in school(, it) would be easier to take classes because there is(would be) no distraction. In conclusion the ban on cellphone would be beneficial for the student to better study and (for the) work environment.

Cellphone in school

In my point of view I think it would be a good option to ban cell phones in school because it is a very strong distraction for students. classes because they are used to send text messages and so on. besides the novelty of the BlackBerry to become crazy and most of the teenagers have one and are always attached to them. texting, facebook, twitter etc. and this causes a lot in class are distracted and not pay attention and this causes a change or bad marks because of the cell. all this technology that has emerged lately is true that in many cases is very useful but if not used properly to work and only to lose time can impair student learning at school. and the time to ban cell phones in school would be easier to take classes because there is no distraction. In conclusion the ban on cellphone would be beneficial for the student to better study and work environment.

Writing Activity 6

Write a paragraph where you persuade you reader whether the use of mobile phones for students should or should not be banned at school.

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I will compare the quality and service of McDonald's and Burger King. In my opinion Mc.has a better quality of its hamburgers because its menus are more recognized here in Guatemala and many people prefer these burger . People also feel that the fries of McDonald’s has better flavor than Burger King. I also believe that most people prefer a Big Mac instead of the Whooper of Burger King. I think the service of McDonald’s is better because it has home service for some time now while Burger King recently has this service and something that also affects is that it still has few motorcycles to go out and spread the order, and those little details are losing customers and that is why many people prefer McDonald’s. Another advantage of McDonald’s is that it has other chips for customers such as Mc. potatoes while Burger King has no other chips more than common. Another product which makes the difference for example is the Mc. flurry of oreo which is preferred by customers. In conclusion I feel Mc. beats Burger in many aspects of products and services which keep M.Up in sales.

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I will compare the quality and service of McDonald's and Burger King(.) in(In) my opinion mc(Mc.) has a better quality of their(its) hamburgers because their(its) menus are more recognized here in Guatemala and many people prefer these burgers(.) (People) also feels(feel) that the fries (of) Mcdonald´s(McDonald’s) has better flavor than Burger King. I also believe that most people prefer a big mac(Big Mac) for(instead of) the wooper(Whooper) the(of) Burger King. I think the service of Mcdonald´s(McDonald’s) is better because (it) has (home) service (for some) times(time now) at home while Burger King recently that has this service and something that also affects is that it still has few motorcycles to go out and spread the orders(,) and those little details are losing customers and that is why many people prefer Mcdonald´s(McDonald’s) . Another advantage of Mcdonald´s(McDonald’s) is that it has other chips for customers such as mc(Mc.) potatoes while the burger king(Burger King) has no other chips more than common(,)(.) another(Another) product which is(makes) the difference for example (is) the mc(Mc.) flurry of oreo(,) who(which is) prefer(preferred) to(by) customers. In conclusion I feel mc(Mc.) beats (Burger) in many aspects of products and services that have better burger king to compete and (which) keep up mc(Mc. Up) in sales.