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(I visited New York with my family.) on this(This) trip was very good because we had a lot of fun and(with) the family (and we) also visited many places, had many adventures with my cousins, fathers(parents) and uncles(,)(.) (My uncles)this trip was(are) living in New York where my uncles do(and we did) this trip in December last year(,)(.) our(Our) trip was a month where we had the opportunity to have enough time to get to know (many places) and (to) have fun(.)

in the(The) first days we visited several museums, many restaurants (and) in the following days we visited the where they(the Twin Towers) were before (the terrorist attacks) the twin towers, and there was only one large (empty piece of) land with nothing built(.) on that(That) day was one of the coldest(; it) was 10 degrees below zero(,)(.) after that to the(The) next day we went to a skating rink (in) the rockefeller(Rockefeller) center(. We) met (different places) in the following days(,) we went to Manhattan, walk(walked) and learn(learned) a little(,)(.) after(After that) we had a trip there as(which lasted) an hour to go to New Jersey(;) we ate in a typical food and then returned to the house(,)(.) we(We) were also released(impressed) on(by the) empire state(Empire State building) but we had to make a big queue(line) to get on(to) the roof(,)(.) (We) also went to a place that was about four hours from New York to go skiing(;) and learn a little place after this lunch there, returned to New York and then (we) went to a mall to buy clothes and some gifts for the family that was here in Guatemala(,)(.) the(The) last place we visited was the Statue of Liberty a very nice and big (place) where you can see all the new town york(New Town York).

 to(To) complete the trip we packed our things and then went to the airport, but had to wait about four hours to climb and take off the plane because he(it) could not take off due to bad weather(;) he(it) was doing it was snowing(, so we had to wait to come) back here to Guatemala (which we did on) mucho.y the four(fourth of) January. (What) I learned from this trip was very interesting because I went to meet other people, the kind of life that occurs in New York that is (a) night (lifestyle.) (It) is also a very quiet town without much(many) risk(risks) of assault(assaults) or something similar(,)(.) I also learned a little to develop my patience because we had to wait quite (a lot) at the airport that the plane took off(.) more and better besides (I loved to) live with my family and (have) lots of fun and have a great time. 

In conclusion, the trip was very good(, I met) places and met(had) many great memories of the pranks we did with my cousins.