In(From) my point of view(,) I think it would be a good option to ban cell
phones in school because it is a very strong distraction for students. (They
get distracted from) classes because they are used to send(sending) text
messages and so on. besides(Besides,) the novelty of the BlackBerry to(today
has made kids) become crazy and most of the teenagers have one and are always
attached to them(.) texting, (or in) facebook, twitter(,) etc. and this
causes a lot(that) in (many) class(classes they) are distracted
and not pay attention(.) and(In the end) this causes a change or bad
marks because of the cell. all(All) this technology that has emerged
lately is true that in many cases is very useful but if not used
properly to work and(students will) only to lose time (and the
phones) can impair student learning at school. and the time to ban(By banning)
cell phones in school(, it) would be easier to take classes because there is(would
be) no distraction. In conclusion the ban on cellphone would be beneficial for
the student to better study and (for the) work environment.
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