domingo, 16 de octubre de 2011

paper 2 activity 5

Can money buy happiness?

People think that money will always bring them good fortune, but they´re wrong, wrong because you change your personality and you start treating people who doesn’t have also a lot money like they were less that humans, even you think yourself better than them because you can buy things they never will, and when you realize how much your treat towards other people has changed, it is too late since that people will hate you, or they will never want to see you again in their lives.

Money doesn’t buy happiness because it makes rather than give you freedom, turns you into a slave because you will be miserable when you lack of it. Also, there is people in the world that is happy even though they don´t have a lot of money since they are able to enjoy the simple life; additionally, people that doesn’t have much money enjoy greatly when they earn something what does not happen with rich people since they get all they want, so they really don’t know how good feels to achieve something. To conclude, I rather be poor but capable of enjoying the little things than being rich but shallow and a bad son and friend.

I've always felt that the money is not the happiness of a person; money does not make a person happy. It may be in some material aspects but the material things are not very important to the happiness of life. Having plenty of material things, a brand new car, the new iPod to hit the market, and so on doesn’t give happiness. You can make a person happy, all bought with money. But, are all these things real happiness? From my point of view, it may be, but you can have a lot of material things like a millionaire, but if a person does not have the love of a family, no friends, or someone who really cares, regardless of money, he won’t feel happy.

Money cannot buy feelings and raise a family, which I think is very important and nice to have with or without a lot of money. A close family that provides love is happiness for your entire life, apart from money. Money can give a plus to being happy with aspects of entertainment or distractions which obviously you have to pay, but love and family unity cannot be purchased with money. Some of my friends care about material things and it is clear how they would prefer to have a lot of money to buy whatever they wanted; they all think that material things are more important. Sometimes I wonder if they would keep buying instead of having friends and a family, things that money cannot buy. Even helping others in need is a way to make good use of the money so you can bring happiness to others around you.

Review activity 4

“Fast food should be forbidden for young people under the age of 18”

From my point of view I think it would be good to forbid fast food to people under 18. It’s true it would hurt too much and it would be good if not remove but the parents would have to be aware that their children do not buy fast food very often, to not harm themselves.
Another important point in fast food is that many people buy it because they feel like treating themselves once a week and eat other foods or vary the routine of what they eat. The important thing for people who are under 18 years is not over eating that food such as: McDonalds, campero, pizza etc. These are foods high in fat and cause excessive damage to the body of the people and elevate cholesterol and other diseases. However I think that with a good control on how often and what time you eat this meals, I think there is not any problem to consume them.
Also it would be wise to forbid people under 18 to eat fast food because it is the moment where they like to eat that burger or whenever the weekend or a specific day. When people are older, they do not like consuming these products because they prefer a home-cooked meal instead. This is the time when teens can eat fast food because their bodies are young and do not produce much harm as parents or older people who can no longer eat such foods.
In conclusion, fast food is not bad as long as they learn to eat and be very cautious of the amount consumed or how often they eat fast food. Ideally in order not to damage the body, it is advisable to eat it only once a week or every two weeks so the body is not affected and it would not hurt to persons under 18 years consume fast food, but parents also need to greatly influence the children and watch out that the fast food they eat is very little and it is important to also eat food that is homemade, like vegetables and fruits and so one day be able to eat fast food.

sábado, 15 de octubre de 2011

Review


“Fast food should be forbidden for young people under the age of 18”
In(From) my point of view I think it would be good to avoid(forbid) fast food to people under 18(,) because(.) it's(It’s) true but it (would) hurts(hurt) too much and therefore (it) would be good if not removed, because (but) the parents would have to be aware that their children do not have to buy fast food very often(,) (to) not harm them(themselves).
Another important point in fast food is that many people buy it because they feel like compare(treating) it(themselves) once a week to(and) eat other foods or vary the routine of what they eat. The important thing for people who are under 18 years is not over eating that food such as: McDonalds, campero, pizza etc. These are foods high in fat and cause excessive damage to the body of the people and elevate cholesterol and other diseases. However I think I tend(that with) a good control on how often and what time you eat this meal(meals,) I think there is (not) any problem that is(to) consumed(consume them).
Also it would be wise to avoid(forbid) people under 18 (to) eat fast food because it is the moment where they like to eat that burger or whenever the weekend or a specific day(.), however, and when(When) people are older(,) they do not like consuming these products because they prefer (a) home-cooked meal(,) instead(,)(.) (This) is the time where(when) teens can eat fast food because your(their) bodyis(bodies are) young and do not produce much harm as parents or older people who can no longer eating(eat) such foods.
In conclusion, fast food is not bad as long as they learn to eat and be very cautious of the amount consumed or how often you(they) eat fast food(,)(.) ideally(Ideally) in order not to damage the body(, it) is (advisable) to eat (it only) once a week or every two weeks (so) the body is not affected and it would not hurt to persons under 18 years consume fast food, but parents also need to greatly influence the children (and) say(watch out) that (the) fast food they eat (is) very little and it is important to also eat food that is homemade, like vegetables and fruits and so one day be able to eat fast food.

Paper 2 Activity 4

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jueves, 13 de octubre de 2011

paper 2 activity 4

“Fast food should be forbidden for young people under the age of 18”

In my point of view I think it would be good to avoid fast food to people under 18, because it's true but it hurts too much and therefore would be good if not removed, because the parents would have to be aware that their children do not have to buy fast food very often, not harm them.

Another important point in fast food is that many people buy it because they feel like compare it once a week to eat other foods or vary the routine of what they eat. The important thing for people who are under 18 years is not over eating that food such as: McDonalds, campero, pizza etc. These are foods high in fat and cause excessive damage to the body of the people and elevate cholesterol and other diseases. However I think I tend a good control on how often and what time you eat this meal I think there is any problem that is consumed.

Also it would be wise to avoid people under 18 eat fast food because it is the moment where they like to eat that burger or whenever the weekend or a specific day, however, and when people are older they do not like consuming these products because they prefer home-cooked meal, instead, is the time where teens can eat fast food because your body is young and do not produce much harm as parents or older people who can no longer eating such foods.

In conclusion, fast food is not bad as long as they learn to eat and be very cautious of the amount consumed or how often you eat fast food, ideally in order not to damage the body is to eat once a week or every two weeks for the body is not affected and it would not hurt to persons under 18 years consume fast food, but parents also need to greatly influence the children say that fast food they eat very little and it is important to also eat food that is homemade, like vegetables and fruits and so one day be able to eat fast food.

Review activity 3

Mr. Julio Asturias
General Principal

Centro Escolar El Roble
Guatemala City

Mr. Asturias,

Good afternoon Mr. Asturias. hope that everything is going very well in your work tasks.I want to make a proposal and suggestions for the school to get out more and take on new projects and ideas.For this reason I will make the proposal to implement and create a new club at school in order to get the students motivated and exploit their full potential both academically and in sports.

To start doing all the steps necessary to create the club, all requirements must be covered to do a good job. The school needs to implement a club where they practice more sports such as ping pong in an environment where they are engaged with professional teachers and try to make sport transcend out of the school. Another sport might be for students who like to think;) we could implement a chess club where you can get teachers from the federation to come to Guatemala to teach students to play with intelligence and have more knowledge about the sport. An academy where students can conduct experiments in a laboratory or a book club and so on can also be added for people who like intellectual activities or so.
These are my proposals for students to take their minds free after a day of studying. This is in order for students to exploit their skills and have fun. This would be done in the afternoon and every student interested to register and commit to attend the club will not only stay as many times as he wants but also will have the opportunity open to other activities. In the academy students will make the effort to open and to attend agreeing to attend 100% of the times.

Review


Mr. Julio Asturias
General Principal

Centro Escolar El Roble
Guatemala City

Mr. Asturias(:)(,)

Good afternoon mr(Mr). asturias(Asturias.) (I) hoping(hope) that everything is going very well in their(your) work tasks(,)(.) I would(want to) make a proposal and suggestions for the school to get out more and take on new projects and ideas. for(For) this (reason I will)would make the proposal to implement and create a new club at school that in order to get the students to motivate(motivated) themselves and exploit their full potential both academically and in sports.

to(To) start doing all the steps necessary to create the club, and all requirements must be covered to (do a good job)create it(,)(.) then this would(The school needs to) implement a club where they practice more sports such as ping (pong) put in(in an environment) which(where they) are engaged in(with) professional teachers and try to (make) transcend the sport (transcend out of the)at school(,)(.) another(Another sport) might be for students who like to think(;) it(we) could implement a chess club where you can get teachers (from the) federation to come to Guatemala to teach students to play with intelligence and have more knowledge about the sport(,)(.) (An academy where students can conduct experiments in a laboratory or a book club and so on) can also be added for people who like intellectual (activities) or (so.)study much an academy where they can conduct experiments in the laboratory or create a book club and so on.

These are my proposals for students to take your(their) mind(minds free) after a day of studying(.) this(This is) in order for students to exploit their skills and have fun(.) this(This) would be done in the afternoon that(and) every student interested to register and commit to attend the club to(will) not only stay as many times (as he wants but also will have) past that opens up the opportunity (open) of(to) some(other) activity(activities.) or some academics and students will not be utilized and not left to(In) the academy (students will) and only make the effort to open and student will be attending(to attend) and why before in rolling the student agrees(agreeing) to attend 100% (of the times).

Also this club can be created in classrooms or (the) school could be built(build) some classrooms in the lower part of the football field to get to the club lounges(,)(.) in(In) conclusion this would be very beneficial for students because (they will get)help and learn a bit distracted on other things that could help them in (the) academic (field) as well(,) as make(making) new friends and interact(interacting) with other students in the school and have a better relationship with their peers and even teachers.

Sincerely,

Frank Orellana.

sábado, 8 de octubre de 2011

paper 2 activity 3

Mr. Julio Asturias
General Principal


Centro Escolar El Roble
Guatemala City

Mr. Asturias:

Good afternoon mr. asturias hoping that everything is going very well in their work tasks, I would make a proposal and suggestions for the school to get out more and take on new projects and ideas. for this would make the proposal to implement and create a new club at school that in order to get the students to motivate themselves and exploit their full potential both academically and in sports.

to start doing all the steps necessary to create the club, and all requirements must be covered to create it, then this would implement a club where they practice more sports such as ping put in which are engaged in professional teachers and try to transcend the sport at school, another might be for students who like to think it could implement a chess club where you can get teachers federation to come to Guatemala to teach students to play with intelligence and have more knowledge about the sport, can also be added for people who like intellectual or study much an academy where they can conduct experiments in the laboratory or create a book club and so on.

These are my proposals for students to take your mind after a day of studying this in order for students to exploit their skills and have fun this would be done in the afternoon that every student interested to register and commit to attend the club to not only stay as many times past that opens up the opportunity of some activity or some academics and students will not be utilized and not left to the academy and only make the effort to open and student will be attending and why before in rolling the student agrees to attend 100%.

Also this club can be created in classrooms or school could be built some classrooms in the lower part of the football field to get to the club lounges, in conclusion this would be very beneficial for students because help and learn a bit distracted on other things that could help them in academic as well as make new friends and interact with other students in the school and have a better relationship with their peers and even teachers.

Sincerely,

Frank Orellana.