jueves, 13 de octubre de 2011

Review


Mr. Julio Asturias
General Principal

Centro Escolar El Roble
Guatemala City

Mr. Asturias(:)(,)

Good afternoon mr(Mr). asturias(Asturias.) (I) hoping(hope) that everything is going very well in their(your) work tasks(,)(.) I would(want to) make a proposal and suggestions for the school to get out more and take on new projects and ideas. for(For) this (reason I will)would make the proposal to implement and create a new club at school that in order to get the students to motivate(motivated) themselves and exploit their full potential both academically and in sports.

to(To) start doing all the steps necessary to create the club, and all requirements must be covered to (do a good job)create it(,)(.) then this would(The school needs to) implement a club where they practice more sports such as ping (pong) put in(in an environment) which(where they) are engaged in(with) professional teachers and try to (make) transcend the sport (transcend out of the)at school(,)(.) another(Another sport) might be for students who like to think(;) it(we) could implement a chess club where you can get teachers (from the) federation to come to Guatemala to teach students to play with intelligence and have more knowledge about the sport(,)(.) (An academy where students can conduct experiments in a laboratory or a book club and so on) can also be added for people who like intellectual (activities) or (so.)study much an academy where they can conduct experiments in the laboratory or create a book club and so on.

These are my proposals for students to take your(their) mind(minds free) after a day of studying(.) this(This is) in order for students to exploit their skills and have fun(.) this(This) would be done in the afternoon that(and) every student interested to register and commit to attend the club to(will) not only stay as many times (as he wants but also will have) past that opens up the opportunity (open) of(to) some(other) activity(activities.) or some academics and students will not be utilized and not left to(In) the academy (students will) and only make the effort to open and student will be attending(to attend) and why before in rolling the student agrees(agreeing) to attend 100% (of the times).

Also this club can be created in classrooms or (the) school could be built(build) some classrooms in the lower part of the football field to get to the club lounges(,)(.) in(In) conclusion this would be very beneficial for students because (they will get)help and learn a bit distracted on other things that could help them in (the) academic (field) as well(,) as make(making) new friends and interact(interacting) with other students in the school and have a better relationship with their peers and even teachers.

Sincerely,

Frank Orellana.

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