sábado, 15 de octubre de 2011

Review


“Fast food should be forbidden for young people under the age of 18”
In(From) my point of view I think it would be good to avoid(forbid) fast food to people under 18(,) because(.) it's(It’s) true but it (would) hurts(hurt) too much and therefore (it) would be good if not removed, because (but) the parents would have to be aware that their children do not have to buy fast food very often(,) (to) not harm them(themselves).
Another important point in fast food is that many people buy it because they feel like compare(treating) it(themselves) once a week to(and) eat other foods or vary the routine of what they eat. The important thing for people who are under 18 years is not over eating that food such as: McDonalds, campero, pizza etc. These are foods high in fat and cause excessive damage to the body of the people and elevate cholesterol and other diseases. However I think I tend(that with) a good control on how often and what time you eat this meal(meals,) I think there is (not) any problem that is(to) consumed(consume them).
Also it would be wise to avoid(forbid) people under 18 (to) eat fast food because it is the moment where they like to eat that burger or whenever the weekend or a specific day(.), however, and when(When) people are older(,) they do not like consuming these products because they prefer (a) home-cooked meal(,) instead(,)(.) (This) is the time where(when) teens can eat fast food because your(their) bodyis(bodies are) young and do not produce much harm as parents or older people who can no longer eating(eat) such foods.
In conclusion, fast food is not bad as long as they learn to eat and be very cautious of the amount consumed or how often you(they) eat fast food(,)(.) ideally(Ideally) in order not to damage the body(, it) is (advisable) to eat (it only) once a week or every two weeks (so) the body is not affected and it would not hurt to persons under 18 years consume fast food, but parents also need to greatly influence the children (and) say(watch out) that (the) fast food they eat (is) very little and it is important to also eat food that is homemade, like vegetables and fruits and so one day be able to eat fast food.

No hay comentarios:

Publicar un comentario