Review

01/10/2011

Benito Carlos

I'm writing because I heard you broke up with your girlfriend and this is affecting your work on the IB program.

the(The) problems a person may face when breaking up with his girlfriend can cause depression and this can get(cause) deconcentrated(loss of attention) in school and have(having) a decline in class, leaving work or hand deliver(delivering it late.), but do Doing it wrong and getting poor results in the notes(scores)(,) may affect that(increase the) lack (of) interest in anything (related to) the school or (you) no longer (will do)does things as they should be(,)(.) (This) can also cause a rebellion in because he(you are) no longer interested in anything else(,)(.) a(The) breakup of a relationship (can) also can be affected(affect) in communication with the family due to(because you are) a bad emotionally (bad) and this can affect communication with the family and (this) can do a little upset due to (your) change their way of being and behavior(behaving.) may also influence q which(Even if you) all try to be (ok it will) not go well because it's going to be(fell like) living in another world because (of) everything that happened with his(your) girlfriend.

what(What) I can say is try to forget everything that happened and try to concentrate on what is important is the International Baccalaureate and focus on out and deliver all internal assessment work and so on. to(To) overcome the breakdown(break up) of your relationship with your girlfriend(, it) would be good not to think much about it(her) and try to keep your mind occupied on other things (that can) give you a better sense of your life and try not to give importance to what happened(,)(.) also(Also) for(to) distract your mind and not remember his(your) ex-girlfriend(, it) would be good for you to concentrate better in school trying to graduate and make(giving) every effort because it is the last year and in which there is everything (is) okay(,)(.) too(Don’t) strive to be good in all the work up as a(the) monograph(extended  essay), laboratories, etc. recordings(, etc). all(All) these things (are important) to keep good notes(scores) and do them well to help you as a study for the International Baccalaureate exams.

I hope everything goes well(;) you try to get over your girlfriend and try to go forward you put interest in graduate(your graduation) and get(getting) the diploma and to try (to do) everything that(so) you do not step on things that can) affecting(affect) the(your) study(studies) and thus be able Being(to be) a person of many accomplishments and (who) graduation(graduates).

Sicerely,

Frank Orellana